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burning sidewalks glisten like sunsets on water.
and rose-colored kisses light up inside of my throat.
some men tell me bedtime stories, but most of them don't bother.
they think they can't hurt me if they think i don't know
what they're about to do
   when the lights go out-
      the children cry,
         seaweed sugared kisses
            paint the blue sky.
and soon it all turns black.
and i can't turn my back.

he touches me once and kisses me twice.
      and locks me up for the rest of the night.
i caress him once and i smile nice.
      till he closes my door and breaks me goodnight.


they think they can't hurt me if they think i don't know;
but i know you.

i burn like a phantom in your midnight-wet dreams.
rose-scented oil anoits me after you have your way.
i'm not a statue, i swear, but you're also not who you seem.
and all the morals from tales tell me stay away
from the bad news bad boys
   when the lights go out-
      the babies die.
         glow-in-the-dark stars shine
            where lovers lie.
but it soon turns black.
and you know i can't go back.

he touches me once and kisses me twice.
      and locks me up for the rest of the night.
i caress him once and i smile nice.
      till he closes my door and breaks me goodnight.

he touches me once and kisses me twice.
      his stone-hard fingers burning me like ice.
i caress him once and i smile nice.
      it's all that i can do to survive this night.


they think they can't hurt me if they think i don't know
but i know you.
©2006-2009 ~burningxinxdecember
:iconburningxinxdecember:

Author's Comments

[a pseudromantic and illegal love]

i just wanted to write a song. yeah.

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:iconcynicalromantic:
I LOVE this piece. I love how you have used childhood imagery along with the sexual imagery, it makes it really sinister. Brilliant.

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I hate to break this to you, but being a coward is not a legitimate career.
:iconvivalafreak:
Yeah. Amazing. I love this.
It's so great, the imagery--and I love the flow it has. I kind of heard a tune in my head while I read it.

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I don't break hearts; I just dent them. <3
:iconyoureyesreflectempty:
I like the rhythm it has. The imagery is fantastic. It gave me goosebumps.

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It's all right. Just step over my corpse and move on to a brighter tomorrow.
:iconzebra-luv4628:
Amazing. A

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Haley <33333

Your mom. Burn.
:iconzebra-luv4628:
Amazing. A

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Haley <33333

Your mom. Burn.
:iconzebra-luv4628:
sorry for the drop off. A new favorite of mine. The imagery is amazing and I like the rhythm it has to it.

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Haley <33333

Your mom. Burn.

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